tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post7269542861356360146..comments2023-03-25T05:41:45.739-05:00Comments on Sara Barnard - Historical and Amish Romance Author: WeWriWa - April 5, 2015 - Missi Wanderin' in the WoodsSara Harrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-77128951156943533092015-04-06T12:39:58.864-05:002015-04-06T12:39:58.864-05:00Sara, just the labels are intriguing enough. To sa...Sara, just the labels are intriguing enough. To say you've lived through much is an understatement. Blessings on you sweet girl and your writing.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09396020400398531264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-87001247127257497052015-04-05T21:54:31.404-05:002015-04-05T21:54:31.404-05:00Thank you Veronica! I moved a section in my final ...Thank you Veronica! I moved a section in my final MS to where Villa was already introduced by now. I will introduce him next week <3Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-34948955495300312792015-04-05T21:24:01.751-05:002015-04-05T21:24:01.751-05:00Thank you JK :-)Thank you JK :-)Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-40846678019480839992015-04-05T13:16:10.001-05:002015-04-05T13:16:10.001-05:00It's always so hard to wait and I thought you ...It's always so hard to wait and I thought you captured the character's state of mind well in this excerpt. Question though: "Villa, the strangler..." A strangler? That threw me but maybe because this is just one tiny snippet of a larger story.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-52537413027451994102015-04-05T11:47:44.542-05:002015-04-05T11:47:44.542-05:00Great snippet!Great snippet!Lizettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03928229702050708148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-73332638283990525352015-04-05T09:49:54.422-05:002015-04-05T09:49:54.422-05:00Thank you, Charmaine! I can't wait to pop over...Thank you, Charmaine! I can't wait to pop over and check out your eight for today! Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-80398791134727422502015-04-05T09:49:17.054-05:002015-04-05T09:49:17.054-05:00Hi Connie! Glad to see you here <3 The messed u...Hi Connie! Glad to see you here <3 The messed up doctors will be the theme of our experiences with Army docs so I understand all too well his plight. I wish you safe travels! Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-41530029024237946622015-04-05T09:47:30.636-05:002015-04-05T09:47:30.636-05:00Thank you Teresa, yes, still so much editing going...Thank you Teresa, yes, still so much editing going on:-) I appreciate your finding them, thank you! Hugs and love from Texas <3Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-1211914894723513072015-04-05T09:12:11.732-05:002015-04-05T09:12:11.732-05:00You are an awesome writer, Sara. You are an awesome writer, Sara. Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-11395783634938652342015-04-05T09:04:11.269-05:002015-04-05T09:04:11.269-05:00Hi Sara! Love your lines. Sounds like a place I&#...Hi Sara! Love your lines. Sounds like a place I've been myself with my oldest son. Turns out he was fine, it was the doctors that were messed up. Anyway - I think the weekend Writing Warriors is a cool thing, and I will participate...soon. LOL I have some traveling to take care of, and once I'm back, I will try this out. Thank you for sharing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06378090146801861924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-444782456900159321.post-67282545516130278342015-04-05T08:22:04.276-05:002015-04-05T08:22:04.276-05:00That's a beautiful Easter wish. Thank you, Sar...That's a beautiful Easter wish. Thank you, Sara, and I hope the same for you. :-)<br /><br />Is this memoir still in the editing stage? A couple of things jumped out at me when I read it. Might just be me. :-) <br /><br />This: "...fragrant scent of body odor..." Fragrant sounds nice, but when I think of body odor, I think of a foul smell.<br /><br />And this line: "...I read magazines until I’d read them all." I'd change a "read" to something else. Perhaps, "I worked through the stack of magazines until I'd read them all." <br /><br />Your story is definitely intriguing, Sara. I sense a great deal of hardship coming...<br />Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com